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The Gray Park

The Gray Park Our parks, are slowly covered in gray Devoured by steel, A cement buffet. Business is booming, but at what cost I ask Of course not the dollar! I refer to green obstruction, a disagreeable task Coughing and sputtering is not reserved for cars as asthmatic patients suffer from smog, like non smothered cigars My park remains green, but for how long I wonder? The gray park gains on the green, construction loud like thunder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/2/2011 11:29:00 AM
Is there a new moon or what? Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Dave. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:42:00 PM
Awesome lines here! Keep up the excellent work! ~Laura
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