The Good, the Bad and the Wasteful

C herish         Y our            T ime,            A dolescence     Y earned.

H ope             O ur             E nergy,         D isillusions       E arned.

I nnocence     U pheld,        E very            U nification        A djourned.

L ustful           T houghts,    N o                 L ove                R eturned.

D evoted        H earts         S trengthen,    T earfully          S purned .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Docherty Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 3:21 AM
Wow!! Now thats got to top all acrostics I've ever seen, very clever your words work in both directions! You must have put much time and effort into getting this one right? I'm in awe at such talent! Well done, and thanks for commenting my writes! Happy Easter, Anna-Marie.
Goff Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 12:08 PM
incredibly creative! Pawlu, nice acrostic, Jim
Chircop Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 11:39 AM
wow this is great,how did you manage to do it?bravo -charma
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