The Good, Bad, and Ugly Samaritan

Once, a man was the personification of down and dirty
He lived the life of a hellion well into his thirties
He drank all day and he drank all night
He lied, cheated, and stole while extinguishing his light

This man was as ugly as hell and always had a sneer
The worst of ne'erdowells was actually full of fear
He went through a constant cycle of failing and running
For he couldn't face the truth that his flailing was stunning

On what felt like the worst day of his existence
He received the most potent and lovely assistance
He was finally told "no" and forced to hit the bottom
He finally realized everything  had caught up with him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 9:38 PM
Great write. One thing good about hitting the bottom...know now only thing left is UP! bbn
Hamner Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 9:46 AM
Very true, Barbara. Thank you.
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November 30, 2017 at 1:33 PM
This is great.. love that title..
Hamner Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, I am so happy to be back on Poetrysoup.
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