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The Golden Rule

A phrase we’re all familiar with I write about today In slightly different context my words come out to play For in my house there dwells a pup who bears a fleece of gold A tongue of pink for kisses a paw he’ll let you hold Retriever is his trait by name He never gets the blues He’s much too busy chasing balls and hiding grandma’s shoes His eyes so brown and gaze so deep could melt the coldest heart The fluffiest companion and oh, did I say smart Yet I digress, back to that phrase I’ll take you all to school For in my house, treats on demand That is “The Golden Rule” For Monte, My beautiful Golden Retriever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 4/1/2023 3:58:00 AM
Hi Mike, sorry i have not visited your page but i have got so far back in my comments that I am spending the whole weekend answering my friends wonderful poems. Retrievers are darlings we had 3 Labradors at the time we sold our home of 40 years to move closer to our son, but Ricky would not let them go to anyone else, he took all 3 him to join his own 2 Labradors. Hugs and blessings Jennifer, We moved into a much smaller house in an estate which in today's world is SLIGHTLY safer!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/1/2023 5:42:00 AM
So your son is a doggie lover too! Aren't they sweet!! I'm so glad they stayed together!!! Thank you for your comments as always!!! Happy Saturday!
Date: 3/27/2023 11:32:00 AM
A poem of pure delight like the ever wagging tail of a Golden Retriever Mike! Congratulations to you and Monte on your win in poetry and in life! Blessings!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/28/2023 4:04:00 AM
I have won at life, I am so blessed, Thank you Sam!!!
Date: 3/27/2023 9:11:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this one again. Remember the treats. Have a blessed day/week writing away....................
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/28/2023 4:03:00 AM
Thanks again Paula xxoo
Date: 3/27/2023 12:20:00 AM
Thank you for entering this poetry contest Mike, and congratulations on your 1st place win! :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2023 3:54:00 AM
Thank you so much B.J!!! Exciting news to start the day!!!
Date: 3/25/2023 4:25:00 PM
I discovered Mike! Golden it is:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/26/2023 5:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Margarita xxoo
Date: 3/24/2023 11:32:00 AM
They certainly bring joy to any family and are so loving and faithful and you can't help but spoil them. Enjoy your weekend Mike. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/25/2023 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Tom, you as well!
Date: 3/22/2023 4:26:00 AM
- Always happy and always your best friend ... a lovely poem, Mike :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/24/2023 4:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, Happy Friday xxoo
Date: 3/19/2023 12:48:00 PM
A fun/cute write. Love It. Have a blessed day/week...................
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/20/2023 3:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula xxoo
Date: 3/18/2023 7:46:00 AM
Very sweet, Mike!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Terry!!
Date: 3/17/2023 9:49:00 AM
Wow Mike this was an absolute delight to read! A big fave for me. Cheers Anne :-)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:44:00 AM
Cheers Anne and thanks xxoo
Date: 3/17/2023 5:38:00 AM
this is much too adorable, a winner by far, gl dear poet, treats do it everytime.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Rose so much xxoo
Date: 3/16/2023 3:49:00 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, I love this poem. I am smiling as I read this poem. My fav. Mike. Happy Thursday. I hope you had a great day. xxxxx=ooooo./Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/18/2023 10:53:00 AM
Hello Mike, enjoy your weekend. You are welcome. xxxx-oooo /Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:48:00 AM
That’s so sweet, thanks Darlene xxoo
Date: 3/16/2023 3:04:00 PM
Monte is special! I fully enjoyed this poem. So nice Mike. :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, Happy Saturday xxoo
Date: 3/16/2023 8:44:00 AM
Aw, so sweet, Mike. I am now 'a believer in Retriever!' ~ Arf, gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:46:00 AM
I knew you would be GW, thanks!
Date: 3/16/2023 8:15:00 AM
So cute! I just visited my aunt. She has a golden retriever. Doubly enjoyed.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim xxoo
Date: 3/16/2023 6:31:00 AM
Beautiful ode to your Monte :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:47:00 AM
Thank you Seeker !!!
Date: 3/16/2023 5:37:00 AM
They are such a pleasure to be around! Your love for your pet makes this poem a joy to read. Best to you, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Vijay!!
Date: 3/16/2023 5:24:00 AM
Aww Mike I want a cuddle….sounds gorgeous….great poem! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/18/2023 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Deb xxoo

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