The Glow

The glow of the screen saver on the TV in the dark The glow of the rings around the moon on a humid night The glow of the stove when the burner is left on high The glow of your bright and beautiful eyes The glow of my heart when your on my mind

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David Williams

Date: 7/29/2012 10:43:00 AM

Billy why don't you have a go at my contest, you may not know the form but have a look at my example, you may love it, and you will get a lot of other poets commenting on your work, I think there is only one place left, if you do , good luck..David

Billy Bier
Date: 7/29/2012 1:17:00 PM

Thank you. I would be glad to try, I just don't even know where to find the contest your speaking of. I don't know how to navigate this site very well yet. I just need to free up a little time and move around on here a bit. I appreciate your comments and help. Thanks much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2012 7:23:00 PM

This is lovely, billy. I much enjoyed it.

Billy Bier
Date: 7/29/2012 10:16:00 AM

Thank you very much. I just started writing about 3 weeks ago. I enjoy it. I don't know what i am dong, LOL but i enjoy it. Oh. . .and "She" means the world to me. :)

David Williams

Date: 7/28/2012 3:31:00 PM

Billy a nice romantic write..David

Billy Bier
Date: 7/29/2012 10:16:00 AM

Thank you very much. I just started writing about 3 weeks ago. I enjoy it. I don't know what i am dong, LOL but i enjoy it. Oh. . .and "She" means the world to me. :)