The Girl With Everything

The girl with everything is what I wanna be, and I'd give anything to make her me. face so beautiful, hair so right, my dreams are shattered. She's the star that shines bright. The perfect polish on her nails, I'd rather be her than anyone else. Everyone knows she's coming but the scent of her signature perfume, you feel an envious vibe whenever she enters the room. She can have any guys she wants, and she's got the perfect body. People think she's nice and sweet and the guys think she's such a hottie. I'd give anything to make her me, the girl with everything is all I wanna be

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Jay Loveless

Date: 2/24/2010 10:42:00 AM

You gotta think how empty this girl feels inside, everyone acts like her friend, but no one knows her on the inside, she hides who she really is behind her pretty face, worried that so easily someone could take her place, shes empty and cold sometimes, and she doesnt know how to survive, trying just to be, who everyone wants her to be, afraid to just be real, wishing inside that someone else could be she...awesome poem hun, check out the book 18 minutes.

The Melody Sings

Date: 2/23/2010 10:57:00 AM

Nice. Strive of perfection...to bad no one except Jesus and God are! But actually we are perfect to Them so we don't need all this eartly beauty and superficial garbage!