The Girl In the Mirror

The mirror was her worst enemy
She hated the girl looking back at her
All she wanted was to be free
Of that unwanted specter
The girl in the mirror refused to see
How wonderful her insides were
All she saw was what she could be
If she could just transfer
Out of this hated chair you see
That she would much prefer
What she wanted was to be free
To live like most everyone on Earth
Not confined to this chair eternally
The masses always looking at her
Saying "Oh my! What a pity!"
"Pity" had become such a terrible slur
She really just wanted to dance with glee
With no one looking down on her
So the girl in the chair made her plea
And the girl in the mirror concurred
Maybe they should just try to be happy
After all the girl in the mirror was her

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/23/2013 9:35:00 AM
Great poem ! I can feel every word ! so meaningful :)
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:57:00 PM
I love this! Incredible piece! Looking forward to more of your poems!(=
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Date: 7/22/2013 3:17:00 AM
Nice twist at the end. I actually find it hard to stare at myself in the mirror :) nicely done!
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Date: 7/21/2013 5:01:00 PM
very nicely said ;}
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Date: 7/21/2013 11:05:00 AM
The best things in life are experienced on the inside. These are our treasures. There are some good people on this planet who realize that touching is much more than skin deep.
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Date: 7/18/2013 1:33:00 AM
awesome!!!!
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Date: 7/17/2013 7:43:00 PM
A wonderful insightful write, April! Always,Annalise
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:27:00 PM
Very nicely written, my dear April! You touched my heart... hugs, Jack xoxox
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Date: 7/17/2013 12:27:00 PM
I can only imagine the life of the handicapped. This write is very revealing. Well penned too!
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Date: 7/17/2013 10:02:00 AM
Thanks for your comments. this was nicely done with great depth. connie
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Date: 7/16/2013 4:41:00 PM
I had to read this a couple times...It got me in the heart. I really love your heartfelt writes! :o)
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Date: 7/16/2013 2:41:00 PM
I like this poem. Good job.
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Date: 7/16/2013 2:32:00 PM
So very touching this is April...love,Deb
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