The Girl In a Fallen Angel Red Dress

September 16 ,  2014 12:15 pm
The Girl in a fallen Angel red dress
I witness these guys looking at this beautiful girl she seems to be trouble. What I see in her is that she is so beautiful but deep down in her heart something’s missing like a positive mind and her love has been removed. What I see in her is depraving and a deceiving sight of evil that should be destroyed. These guys that are flirting with this woman should leave her alone because they don’t know what they are up against. The girl in a fallen angel red dress was a beautiful decent young woman but when she did deceitful things her courage and kindness sealed forever. Now She has overcome to be more dangerous and more vicious. Legendary says  that in the story she flirts and sometimes mate  with the  virgin  men first when she is pretty and irresistible but when she turn ugly and unattractive she kills the men and take away their semen away . Every men that she kills reminds her of the time that she was slaughtered in the woods by other men that just took advantage of her what they didn't know is that she wasn't no virgin to be sacrificed so their repercussions cost them to be killed.  The girl in  the red dress has been lost into the Concrete of Hell where she lays and lastly rests.

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Date: 2/9/2016 2:52:00 PM
Interesting write Cmack.
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