The Girl I Want To Be With 2 Modified

I see you around school
Hoping you think I’m cool
Trying to not be a fool.
I look in your eyes
And I die in side
Because I’m so shy to say how I feel
It’s so unreal
 
The beauty that runs through my mind
Makes me think I’m blind.
Because I’m focused on one thing.
And that’s a daughter of a king.
Wanting to be the one to give you a ring.
But I’m a weird guy who thinks he can sing.
 
You have beauty inside out
Without a doubt
That’s what I’m threatened about
I don’t like to tap out
So at times I may black out
 
I don’t want to give up on my dreams
I respect the marines.
But my dream is to be with you
I want to stick to you like glue
Maddison this is hand written just for you
 
Wishing one day you’ll be mine.
You’re the sun that shines.
I may not be perfection
But I’ll be your protection.
 
I hope I’m not coming on too strong.
I’m sorry that this note is very long.
 
I’m sorry when I’m rude.
That just means I want food.
I love your attitude.
 
You think I’m being creepy
I hope I’m not too cheesy.
 
I don’t know why God would allow an angel to walk on this planet
Most guys only want one thing in high school
And it’s really disrespectful
 
As for me I’m different
If I ever get the chance
I’d probably show you how bad I can dance
 
Id treat you like a lady
That sounds crazy
But the truth is I’m not lazy
 
I act like a goof ball
The truth is I fall
Like I’m drinking alcohol.
With your long dark hair, and beautiful smile
I really hope you don’t think I’m a juvenile
Like my friend Kyle.
 
I’m definitely not the smartest.
I’m definitely not the largest.
You’re the coolest regardless.
 
I hope you’re not uncomfortable
Trust me I would hate to make you miserable
 
If you don’t like poetry
I’m sorry this is the only fun way I can speak honestly.
 
Again I’m sorry if I’m rude
Writing this I just slipped on an ice cube.
 
You should know who I am.
You’re the type of girl that I would call a Grand slam
 
I don’t really know how to show emotions
Even when I almost made an explosion.
 
You are the type of girl any guy would be lucky to have
You are the type of girl guys wished they had
You are the type of girl guys would never forget if they lose
They’ll get the blues
 
I would tell you my name
But I’m too shy to explain
My lady
I hope someday I can call you my baby

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/4/2016 12:12:00 AM
I hope you give her a copy of the poem - a charming write:-) hugs janxxx
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Date: 4/12/2016 11:52:00 AM
Dakota Burroughs, i was moved by your write. linda
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