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The Girl and the Balloons

A field with grass and flowers Two trees full bloomed with leaves There is a large wooden fence The sky is a pale blue colour With patches of white clouds On the field is a little girl She holds four colourful ballons Slowly she lets go of them Watching them float upwards She smiles as she sets them free

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Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 8/20/2018 3:58:00 PM

This is very sweet.The way you’ve written it is like watching the scene unfold.Iespecially like your ending line.It wraps it up completely.Really nice. June.(Sylvia)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2018 1:37:00 PM

Hello Sylvia, I wrote this poem from a wall hanging on a wall. To me it is a child happy to let go of the balloons. So I wrote it as a poem. Thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/20/2018 12:30:00 PM

This is a lovely image, Darlene. So peaceful and serene I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon Happy Monday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2018 1:39:00 PM

Hello Mike, thank you for the lovely comment.It was fun to create. I had surgery done on my big toe, that is why i have not been on the computer. Have a nice day my friend.xxxx-ooo

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/5/2018 7:04:00 PM

This is sweet poem Darlene. Feels special :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2018 5:50:00 PM

Hello Heidi,I can picture a little girl in a field,letting go of the balloons one by one. Have a nice evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2018 7:07:00 PM

this is a very lovely picture of a little girl in that field, DArlene. I really enjoyed this one.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/8/2019 2:07:00 PM

Hello Andrea, it is a beautiful painting, so i wrote about it. in a poem. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2018 2:53:00 PM

what charming imagery Darlene. I wonder how long before balloons are banned because they are bad for the environment:-( hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2018 6:24:00 PM

Hello Jan, yes i wonder how long balloons will be banned. Thank you for the lovely comment.I enjoyed creating this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.{hugs} Darlene

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/4/2018 11:16:00 AM

darlene, a beauty !... what a poetic flight with lovely balloons!..huggs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2018 12:01:00 PM

Hello Nette, thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/4/2018 1:50:00 AM

Lovely image you've created Darlene. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2018 12:03:00 PM

Hello Tom, hope all is well with you. thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.