The Gift That I Give You

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The gift I'm giving you is already inside your traits
Smile at me only if your grin extends to your gaze. 
A genus, warm, and lovely smile brightens your face.

I provide you dreams that rouse hope and grace.
I propose to you hues of joy as the glow of blaze.
The gift I'm giving you is already inside your traits.

I offer you tender and heartfelt views and embrace.
My gift to you is wider than just my inheritance phase.
A genus, warm, and lovely smile brightens your face.

My awe for you is akin though an angel aloft in space.
The ease of life is the fruit of giving in lovely praise.
The gift I'm giving you is already inside your traits.

The prize I'm giving you is wiser than the cosmos ace.
The present I am giving you is a prize from the uprise.
A genus, warm, and lovely smile brightens your face.

You, my kids, are the sunrise that dulls the fiercest case.
My gift to you is pure, total commitment! and love rays
A genus, warm, and lovely smile brightens your face.
The gift I'm giving you is already inside your traits.


Written: June 26, 2021

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/27/2021 10:43:00 AM

And a beautiful gift you have given them too Lasaad, you write the villanelle form so well. Hope your day is going well. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2021 10:52:00 AM

Appreciate your kind words, Tom. Your appreciation is so delightful for me, and I hope you have a wonderful weekend.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/27/2021 7:24:00 AM

When husband is good wife automatically smiles. Loved your poem which I felt had genuine feelings. Last para superb. Have a wonderful day ahead

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2021 7:37:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words and fine appreciation, my friend Rama. Blessings, Enjoy your weekend

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/27/2021 5:24:00 AM

Delightful rendering of love so meaningfully delivered. A genuine gift, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2021 7:36:00 AM

Thank you for your kind appreciation, my friend Vijay. Enjoy your weekend

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/27/2021 4:41:00 AM

What an outstanding poem filled with beauty and tenderness that elate the heart and soul of the reader. No better gift than the one which comes from the heart, my friend, Lasaad! This is the second time I comment. The first comment seems lost. Blessings.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2021 6:26:00 AM

Demetrios, my dearest friend, I'm grateful for all your kind and amazing comments; your informative remark added a huge allure to the poem itself, and I'm grateful for your generous and consistent support. Have a wonderful and safe weekend.