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The Gift Of Winter When Winter brings old seasons to their ends and plans a rest for Spring and Summer trends, we're eased by lovely scenes that Autumn sends, while Winter puts to sleep those retirees of brittle vines and leafless, naked trees, exhausted roots and bulbs, with expertise. The drab gray scenes will brighten in degrees when layered white with spread of pristine snow that purifies and moistens ground below, where life, like 'sleeping beauty', waits to grow. When Winter has achieved her last plateau, she nudges Spring to wake and take the stage. But while the sleeping ground does not engage in life-filled days, our Winter does upstage with beauty of her wonderland onstage; snow-covered limbs and hills of velvet white that leaves us breathless at their very sight, as sunbeams glisten and reflect the light. This gift she offers as her own delight, when Winter brings old seasons to their ends. Sandra M. Haight ~9th Place~ Premiere Contest: Impress Me With A New Poem Sponsor: SKAT A Judged: 01/17/2018 ~1st Place~ Contest: Rhyme Time III Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 12/25/2017 Rules of Previous Contest: FIVE stanzas using this rhyme scheme: STANZA 1: A-A-A-B STANZA 2: B-B-B-C STANZA 3: C-C-C-D STANZA 4: D-D-D-E STANZA 5: E-E-E-A 5th Stanza: Last line must be the exact same sentence as first line in 1st Stanza

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Date: 1/19/2018 11:57:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sandra, what a wonderful write, full of exquisite imagery, (and a multiple winner!) - blessings and keep up the wonderful work, friend! :-) <3
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/20/2018 8:25:00 AM
I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, Gregory. Thank you so much for your very kind and supportive comments, congrats, and blessings. Much appreciated. Sandra :)
Date: 1/17/2018 8:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. Well done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/20/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/17/2018 7:30:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/20/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve! I appreciate your visits and congrats on my win. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/17/2018 3:48:00 PM
Sandra Haight, thank you for entering my recent contest. Congratulations on your Awesome win. <3 SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/17/2018 5:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Skat! Glad to see you back, and I appreciate being on your winner's list! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/9/2018 3:38:00 AM
This is a magnificent poem about the wondrous of winter. Each line captures my heart with much elation! It steers my mind towards nature's pure gift! Thank you, for sharing Sandra! You have done it very well! Congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/17/2018 5:36:00 PM
Estela, thank you for your visit and your uplifting and supportive comments! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 12/25/2017 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Submimal. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Sandra
Date: 12/25/2017 8:00:00 PM
Nicely done and imagery is just beautiful , Sandra, congratulations on your win! Merry Christmas and God Bless Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/25/2017 5:26:00 PM
you depicted winter so beautifully Sandra, a joy to read on Christmas Day. Many congrats on your win:-)I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and New year:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/25/2017 11:37:00 AM
This is gorgeously written. I can see why you won!
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Date: 12/29/2017 2:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dale. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Sandra
Date: 12/25/2017 11:17:00 AM
Sandra, such a wonderful depiction of winter with such beautiful imagery. Congrats o your win! John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Sandra
Date: 12/25/2017 10:52:00 AM
oh sweet Sandra! What beautiful imagery and rhythm :) I loved this poem so much...thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:34:00 PM
Thank you once again, Laura, for a wonderful contest theme and for my lovely placement. Happy New Year to you! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/16/2017 12:54:00 PM
Lovely Sandra, congratulation ahead of time...
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Date: 12/29/2017 2:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie! Sandra
Date: 12/15/2017 10:10:00 PM
This reads like poems from some of the old masters; a lyric straight from the pen of Keats or Longfellow. The imagery, the rhyme, the snow-covered landscape are all so skillfully written. The lines are very natural and don't sound at all forced. Please keep writing poems like this. It is very beautiful.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gracie. I appreciate your visit and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Sandra
Date: 12/15/2017 7:28:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful Sandra. The theme, the rhyme and that rich rhythm are superb. A glorious write with wondrous expression. Gorgeous poetry. Good luck in the contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/15/2017 3:56:00 PM
a wonderful poem
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:31:00 PM
Thank you so much! Sandra

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