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The Gift of Winter


The Gift Of Winter


When Winter brings old seasons to their ends
      and plans a rest for Spring and Summer trends,
we're eased by lovely scenes that Autumn sends,
     while Winter puts to sleep those retirees 

of brittle vines and leafless, naked trees,
     exhausted roots and bulbs, with expertise.
The drab gray scenes will brighten in degrees
     when layered white with spread of pristine snow

that purifies and moistens ground below,
     where life, like 'sleeping beauty', waits to grow. 
When Winter has achieved her last plateau,
     she nudges Spring to wake and take the stage.

But while the sleeping ground does not engage
     in life-filled days, our Winter does upstage
with beauty of her wonderland onstage;
     snow-covered limbs and hills of velvet white 

that leaves us breathless at their very sight,
     as sunbeams glisten and reflect the light. 
This gift she offers as her own delight,
     when Winter brings old seasons to their ends.


Sandra M. Haight

~9th Place~
Premiere Contest: Impress Me With A New Poem
Sponsor: SKAT A
Judged: 01/17/2018

~1st Place~
Contest: Rhyme Time III
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Judged: 12/25/2017

Rules of Previous Contest: FIVE stanzas using this rhyme scheme:
STANZA 1: A-A-A-B  STANZA   2: B-B-B-C STANZA   3: C-C-C-D
STANZA 4: D-D-D-E   STANZA  5: E-E-E-A 
5th Stanza: Last line must be the exact same sentence as first line in 1st Stanza
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Barden Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 11:57 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sandra, what a wonderful write, full of exquisite imagery, (and a multiple winner!) - blessings and keep up the wonderful work, friend! :-) <3
Haight Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:25 AM
I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, Gregory. Thank you so much for your very kind and supportive comments, congrats, and blessings. Much appreciated. Sandra :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. Well done.
Haight Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thank you very much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thank you very much, Eve! I appreciate your visits and congrats on my win. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Sandra Haight, thank you for entering my recent contest. Congratulations on your Awesome win. <3 SKAT
Haight Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Thank you very much, Skat! Glad to see you back, and I appreciate being on your winner's list! Hugs, Sandra
Canama Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 3:38 AM
This is a magnificent poem about the wondrous of winter. Each line captures my heart with much elation! It steers my mind towards nature's pure gift! Thank you, for sharing Sandra! You have done it very well! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Estela, thank you for your visit and your uplifting and supportive comments! Much appreciated. Sandra
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December 25, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Thank you so much, Submimal. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Sandra
Roper Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 8:00 PM
Nicely done and imagery is just beautiful , Sandra, congratulations on your win! Merry Christmas and God Bless Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:36 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 5:26 PM
you depicted winter so beautifully Sandra, a joy to read on Christmas Day. Many congrats on your win:-)I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and New year:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:34 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
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December 25, 2017 at 11:37 AM
This is gorgeously written. I can see why you won!
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:35 PM
Thank you so much, Dale. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Sandra
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December 25, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Sandra, such a wonderful depiction of winter with such beautiful imagery. Congrats o your win! John
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:35 PM
Thank you so much, John. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Sandra
Scars Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:52 AM
oh sweet Sandra! What beautiful imagery and rhythm :) I loved this poem so much...thank you and congrats :) -luloo
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:34 PM
Thank you once again, Laura, for a wonderful contest theme and for my lovely placement. Happy New Year to you! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Lovely Sandra, congratulation ahead of time...
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:32 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie! Sandra
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December 15, 2017 at 10:10 PM
This reads like poems from some of the old masters; a lyric straight from the pen of Keats or Longfellow. The imagery, the rhyme, the snow-covered landscape are all so skillfully written. The lines are very natural and don't sound at all forced. Please keep writing poems like this. It is very beautiful.
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Thank you so much, Gracie. I appreciate your visit and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Sandra
Ashley Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 7:28 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful Sandra. The theme, the rhyme and that rich rhythm are superb. A glorious write with wondrous expression. Gorgeous poetry. Good luck in the contest!
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Jay Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 3:56 PM
a wonderful poem
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Thank you so much! Sandra
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