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The Gift of Love

Love's gift is sweet, between a pair of souls, that connect as one. It cannot be broken once the attraction has begun. The fire sparks and the flames soar high into the night. The air is crisp and tight. The lovers join together and embrace each other with an honest dedication. Their minds race to love's melodious celebration. The rhythm is quite swift, to love's sweet gift. Dawn Kilby Copyright ©2008 Dawn Kilby

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Date: 10/26/2008 5:17:00 AM
This poem flows with such passion and style. I like the free flow narrative and articulation of love. This is passionate and touching. I really like this words "Love's gift is sweet…the fire sparks and the flames soar high into the night.” Great job and imagery! ~Joseph
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