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The Gift of Life

Even before we open our eyes Before we can speak truths and lies Even before we take our first walk Before we reach the finishing mark Even before we see the first light Our soul is born with all its might We arrive at the place we call home A place we are always and never lone Its a place where we have to fight a lifelong war But we find our allies are never too far Pain,anguish,sufferings may try to pull us to a blackhole But success relieves our mind,body and SOUL Our mission,our challenge called life The GODLY gift,a gift called life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/29/2011 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations Sambadi on your win in the "Any Form -Theme" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 7:45:00 AM
Congrats Sambardi on your super win in Brian's contest with this elegant entry luv..enjoy..
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:35:00 PM
An excellent write !Enjoyed very much....I think the FORM of this poem is COUPLET.
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Date: 6/13/2011 3:32:00 PM
Nice expressions on the gift of life, Sambadi
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