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The Gift

"I feel you are troubled," Said the traveller on my road. "Your burden, it seems heavy Let me help you with your load." "So kind" I said, but no "It is too vast I fear, Heavily it weighs upon my heart, For one no longer here." "I know" said he, but here am I I come to ease your pain, Worry not, she waits for you You will see her again." My eyes, they cried a thousand tears My pain, I felt it lift. The traveller though, he was gone I thanked God for his gift. An angel, he must have been He knew of my despair. I felt him reach into my heart, His words, lay comfort there. Entry for CONTEST NO 360,any theme, Any form,max of 25 lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 10/11/2017. Placed 1st.

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Date: 11/11/2017 8:45:00 PM
Very nice, Gary, and wonderfully faithful ... congrats on your win! :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/12/2017 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Gregory :)
Date: 11/11/2017 8:27:00 PM
So lovely and uplifting, Gary. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Sandra
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/12/2017 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Sandra :)
Date: 11/11/2017 11:21:00 AM
This is so beautiful--well-written and uplifting, Gary. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 11/11/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Janice :)
Date: 11/11/2017 10:35:00 AM
Charming. Congrats on your win, Gary.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/11/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Line :)
Date: 11/11/2017 8:02:00 AM
This is beautiful and comforting. Congrats on your win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/11/2017 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Dale :)
Date: 11/10/2017 9:02:00 PM
Wow Gary! Beautiful, spiritual, angel and love combine together for a creative and superb write. I truly enjoyed your exquisite poem! Good luck in the contest!!
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/11/2017 2:24:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 11/10/2017 9:03:00 AM
Wow! Perhaps true! Love it!
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/10/2017 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 11/10/2017 7:47:00 AM
Very creative--a comforting discourse of heavenly help--best for a win, Gary!
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/10/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 11/10/2017 7:09:00 AM
A very well written story in this poem Gary. Good luck in the contest :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/10/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :)

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