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The Gift

The Gift of Life Every day as I open my eye, a brand new sun shines bright in the sky, Every flower that colours my day, keeps gloom and darkness at bay, Every breeze that sends fragrance, a gift of life feels His essence, Every meal that my mom cooks, satiates my appetite to contented looks, Every friend waiting me arrive, a sweet smile gives logic to survive, Every laugh that goes in air, an achievement shows its unique flair, Every tear has something to teach, as flow of emotions will preach, Every heartbeat that speaks of love, thrives for the peaceful dove, Every relation has its own taste, without these life is a big waste, Every work is a daily worship, wholehearted and not with a whip, Every material thing is a lust, never to forget mortality comes must, Every soul that behaves kind, sends glitter even in eyes of a blind, Every night I pray to The Lord, give might to the pen and let perish the sword ! Written September 4th, 2014 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma For contest ' The gift' by Verlena S. Walker Ranked 1st

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Date: 9/12/2014 9:45:00 AM
I like how you interpreted the contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/11/2014 9:23:00 PM
Beautiful Upma with a beautiful poem for "The Gift." Congratulations on your high marks girlfriend. Verlena
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Date: 9/11/2014 8:45:00 AM
Hi Dr Upma, Loved every line expressed with heartfelt sentiments. Congratulations on your win. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:11:00 AM
Love your final line!!! Wow a humbling powerful write..:) kudos ..:) this could be a couplet too..:)
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Date: 9/10/2014 7:23:00 PM
Lovely writing, Upma. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/10/2014 7:20:00 PM
Nice win..>PD
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Date: 9/10/2014 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win..... You use your talent well..... great writing..... Jake
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Date: 9/10/2014 3:28:00 PM
This is beautiful Upma! What a gift! and what an apt final line! The rhyme is superb. Congratulations on a top podium finish!! // paul
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:43:00 PM
Dr. Upma, please accept huge congratulations for a spectacular win! Thanks for sharing this wonderful gift! Pandita
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:39:00 PM
A very beautiful poem Dr. Sharma. It was a pleasure reading this lovely poem.
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Date: 9/10/2014 11:56:00 AM
Great anaphorical write, congrats. Dr. Upma
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Date: 9/5/2014 1:08:00 AM
A wonderful poem that I'm sure will place high, Dr. Upma. Thank you and God bless you. Happy writing with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/4/2014 3:52:00 PM
This is powerful and full of wisdom. Thank you for posting and sharing! very lovely and vibrant poetry here. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/4/2014 3:11:00 PM
Dear Dr. Upma, May the sun continue to shine upon you. Your words are beautifully penned and the internal rhyme of each line is breathtaking. Best wishes in Verlena's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/4/2014 3:04:00 PM
A sweet testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading your list of graditudes...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/4/2014 11:54:00 AM
- Every new day is a gift - Enjoy every day even if the sky is dark and it is raining a bit - Lovely poem, Dr.Upma! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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