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Here's a tale from the West. as regards an unnamed man, who is the best. He commutes by motorcycle day and night. assisting the communities in need of light. His origin is such an ardent stance. that it causes groups to dance. Lots of clashes with gangs and outlaws. Never a single shot without flaws. The locals hope he'll decide to stay. But he quickly and silently walks away. This man has been a transient for years. Continually cycling as the sun appears. It has been a while since we met him. Somehow, I believe he is still on the whim. Nothing has been stated regarding sightings. There are, nevertheless, several writings. It must be challenging to ride alone. He must be strong right down to the bone. This myth continues to be a folktale. We lost track of the champion trail. People set out to look for the man. Finding and dragging him was our plan. Worse still, they failed to uncover him. They withdrew as the skies became dim. I estimate that he is at large still. There was always a ride across the hills. He doesn't strike me as a guy at all. however, a ghost answers the call. A riding ghost, what a story! I'm just unsure if it's for glory. I am sure he will reveal his face one day. Because every day I utterly pray. This ridiculous person is the best. who joined in town battles in the West?
Written: January 24, 2023 Marvel Superhero Or Supervillian Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 1/24/2023 9:58:00 PM
That's quite a western tale. A lone saviour going from place to place doing good. And even as a ghost he continues his mission.
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Date: 1/24/2023 4:03:00 PM
Lasaad you have created a legend superhero with your crafted words. You kept the reader guessing who this could be to the very end. Creating suspense and a desire to find out who he was. Building the tale to the very end. You had me at the edge of my seat. Great theme and creativity on your part to bring us to that level in your Super hero or super villan...
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Date: 1/24/2023 5:44:00 PM
I am grateful to you, my friend, for your thoughtful reading of my poetry and the comprehensive reply you provided.

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