The Ghost and the Grave

Shove Me, Push Me Throw Me Away Cause I Know This Would Be A MoMent Of Grace Openly I Express My Expressions Life Lessons Learned Through My Questions Eyes Guessing, Maybe Ill Slow My Pace I Grow To Save Humanity From Destruction You And Me Are Nothin But In Ocean's Slave Focused Rage, I Hope It Makes This Broken Page Mend Into The Endless Blue And Slowly Amaze. But Its Only A GameYou Can Call Me Insane Cause Inside I Still Drive The Lonliest Flame My Bones Are In Pain And My Throat Has Restraint's Im Vocally Brave The Ghost And The Grave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Beaudre Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 9:22 PM
I like your style, your phrases are really unique and expressive, great job!
Culverhouse Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 4:18 PM
The last line really stands out to me, good write, welcome to the soup!! keep writing.
Guerra Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 1:53 PM
artistic flow of words... i like!
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 11:51 AM
Welcome to poetry soup. Interesting work. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 3:20 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Ryan.I wish you the best in your future writing. Love, Carol
Arteaga Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 2:12 PM
this is great, very different vibe I get with a familiar sense, keep giving some more
Chircop Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 1:01 PM
THE ghost and the grave--:inside i still drive the lonliest flame,my bones are in pain--original description--then the ending-im vocally brave--interesting end,like the style--chARMA
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