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The Ghost and the Grave

Shove Me, Push Me Throw Me Away Cause I Know This Would Be A MoMent Of Grace Openly I Express My Expressions Life Lessons Learned Through My Questions Eyes Guessing, Maybe Ill Slow My Pace I Grow To Save Humanity From Destruction You And Me Are Nothin But In Ocean's Slave Focused Rage, I Hope It Makes This Broken Page Mend Into The Endless Blue And Slowly Amaze. But Its Only A GameYou Can Call Me Insane Cause Inside I Still Drive The Lonliest Flame My Bones Are In Pain And My Throat Has Restraint's Im Vocally Brave The Ghost And The Grave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/20/2009 9:22:00 PM
I like your style, your phrases are really unique and expressive, great job!
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Date: 8/20/2009 4:18:00 PM
The last line really stands out to me, good write, welcome to the soup!! keep writing.
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Date: 8/20/2009 1:53:00 PM
artistic flow of words... i like!
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Date: 8/20/2009 11:51:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup. Interesting work. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/20/2009 3:20:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Ryan.I wish you the best in your future writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2009 2:12:00 PM
this is great, very different vibe I get with a familiar sense, keep giving some more
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Date: 8/19/2009 1:01:00 PM
THE ghost and the grave--:inside i still drive the lonliest flame,my bones are in pain--original description--then the ending-im vocally brave--interesting end,like the style--chARMA
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