The Gentle Flow

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Written on January 15, 2025

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A song fades into the dark night Song of wonder in mourning light Breath of grace weeping silent tears God’s love can still the flow of fears Melodies, rich with softest notes Gentle wings who the wind promotes Birds praising until the storm clears God’s love can still the flow of fears Rhythms of desire, humble rising Music flows through each baptizing Harmony that the heart reveres God’s love can still the flow of fears Feeling grows wild as summer fades Chorus trembles as rain cascades It feels like music to the ears God’s love can still the flow of fears

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/23/2025 11:06:00 AM

what a beautiful uplifting poem Regina, I'm so glad I read this today as we have had 3 lots of bad news this week, hugs jan xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/15/2025 5:12:00 AM

Dear Gina, absolutely beautiful—a lyrical embrace of faith and hope. I loved your words "gentle wings" and "rhythms of desire" paints such a serene, uplifting picture. And the refrain, "God’s love can still the flow of fears," is comforting and deeply touches the soul. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/15/2025 12:38:00 AM

That’s lovely Gina, I believe God’s love can still the flow of fears… Beryl