The Generous River

Amidst forests and rocks,the river flows like super jet
                 Livelihood for the organisms yearning for its advent
                    Adept at adapting shape,just to benefit others
                 Ungrudgingly accumulates minerals,silt and ores
                     Even after discerning our attempt to befoul it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Turner Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Intelligent observations make for a wonderful poem, Supraja. Well done:)
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 5:27 PM
good one, that is the generosity of mother earth, and for how long will she stand for our greed? It is a crazy world!
Kannan Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 10:43 AM
So true... We live in a selfish world... Thanks a lot for dropping by...
Onclaud Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 1:26 PM
may we care for our rivers which nourish us... beautiful piece, supraja.. huggs
Kannan Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 10:41 AM
We have to Nette... Thanks a lot for dropping by...
Turner Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 8:06 AM
A lovely poem, Supraja. Thankfully the river is powerful enough to overcome man's foolishness.
Kannan Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 10:41 AM
You are right Daniel...That's why we are alive... Thanks a lot for your support...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Appreciating the miracles of nature is a virtue dear, Supraja! Excellent poem!
Kannan Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 10:39 AM
How nice of you to say this...Thanks a lot Demetrios...
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