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Carrie Richards

The Gathering

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       An argument brews...
               Interlude of rest is stirred
                       by distant thunder












Inspired by Raul's "Inspiration in Haiku" contest

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2009

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July 7, 2009 at 2:19 PM

Carrie ~this is a terrific haiku great use of imagery! Laura :)

Joseph Spence Sr

July 6, 2009 at 3:59 PM

This is an awesome haiku. I like the imagery a lot. There is always a silver lining. Great job! ~Joseph

Misty Penton-Leccese

June 28, 2009 at 8:28 PM

I really like this one. You've painted a wonderful picture. Lots of Love, Misty

June 27, 2009 at 3:30 PM

Thanks for the support Carrie...Raul

June 27, 2009 at 11:40 AM

Beautifully done, Carrie ... takes me away to a wonderful afternoon nap ... smile ...

June 26, 2009 at 7:00 PM

What a beautiful poetess you are, Carrie! poet butterfly

Christopher Higgins

June 26, 2009 at 5:36 AM

I am writing one for this contest and it is not easy to write about a pic in haiku form..you did it well and I wish you all the best.

June 25, 2009 at 11:47 PM

Best wishes with this one Carrie.Will forward you prize early next week.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sajdah Al-Riyami

June 25, 2009 at 2:25 PM

Um the Book "When Rain Clouds Gather" Should so Use this As a Slogan XP

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