The Gates Iii

sad the gates of paradise are, for though wide open to all, few cross their threshold!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
    05 January 2018

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Nigel Fox

January 5, 2018 at 4:19 PM

Demetrios This is very awful English But very very good poetry !

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 5, 2018 at 5:23 PM

My friend, Happy New Year! Thank you so much for pointing out my lack of knowledge of English! I would appreciate if you correct me since it is not my mother tongue. English is one of the four languages I speak and I confess I cannot speak all of them perfectly well! So be kind and re-write it so I can learn! God bless you!