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The Gates Iii

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" THE GATES " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

 

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sad the gates of paradise are, for though wide open to all, few cross their threshold! © Demetrios Trifiatis 05 January 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Nigel Fox
Date: 1/5/2018 4:19:00 PM
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Demetrios This is very awful English But very very good poetry !
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/5/2018 5:23:00 PM
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My friend, Happy New Year! Thank you so much for pointing out my lack of knowledge of English! I would appreciate if you correct me since it is not my mother tongue. English is one of the four languages I speak and I confess I cannot speak all of them perfectly well! So be kind and re-write it so I can learn! God bless you!
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2018 8:50:00 AM
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Very true.. Well said..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2018 7:28:00 AM
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It must take a lot of good deeds to get there--well said, Demetrios.
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Maria Williams
Date: 1/5/2018 5:00:00 AM
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So very true, because so many think they have to make this their paradise. Amazing Monoku as always dearest Demetrios....Maria
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2018 3:26:00 AM
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- So true my friend, he loves us even when we stumble and fail on our way through life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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