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the gatekeeper

twas the night, forsaken to see, another angel, calls to he. He who walks, through desolate skies, teaching young angels, how to fly. Blowing the wind, beneath their wings, keeping them aloft, for everyone to see. This is the man, who controls all fate, the one who lets, people through his gates.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/13/2015 3:02:00 PM
Shannon, Congratulations on your own favorite Halloween Poem. Take Care **SKAT**
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Date: 10/13/2015 12:44:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write shannon!
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Date: 10/10/2015 1:31:00 AM
Hi Shannon. Welcome to Poetry Soup, and a shower of applause to your winning poem! ;-)
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Date: 10/9/2015 5:20:00 PM
Thank You for entering my contest with your Halloween poem. A very unique gem!
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Date: 10/5/2015 3:28:00 AM
- A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Shannon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/3/2015 12:38:00 AM
Reading your poem was a delight, I truly enjoyed it ... CayCay
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Date: 10/2/2015 11:02:00 PM
Hi Shannon, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:05:00 PM
Shannon, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2015 3:41:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.
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