The Gate of Freedom

No one could tell the gate of freedom
Except the one made the whole things
Earthly life is locked in the fog of the unknown 
And trying to find out the way to the kingdom

The lives created in Eden love graceful singing
But their voices are tightly closed by a misty fence
Who among us will turn to be the bright mind?
To sort out the way of stopping leaves from falling?

As long as this moment comes to be real
Each life will then become being eternal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Horn Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 8:01 AM
When we give up what was gave; To all my poems became a slave; All around, Heart did pound; We would do Seattle Victory wave.
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February 11, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Thanks James, Have a nice day!
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