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The Gasp For 'Love'

As a man who suffers from a lung attack and gasps for oxygen, so Am I when you are away from me.... How devastated he feels.......... Hopes and life feel as if there are to come to a hold,rather to an end..... That's how I feel when I can not feel your touch anymore........... The emptiness of being lost is all I feel when you suddenly more away from my life... Even that beautiful and unusual wiper which you say in the morning as a greeting and in the night as a lullaby is no more..... OH!!!.... I cry ...... I look around if at any chance I would catch you gazing at me.... I .....I just desire after your love..... Your love is all I long for in the ring of my life.... When I don't feel your love , I gasp for it.... I am a human in a death bed,so helpless and one more step away from me takes the little air I have to live on... I am nothing anymore.... The more steps you take away through the various ways you show me your love, the more I gasp for your love.... Lord God!!! please stay close...... Close to me...... I gasp after your love..... A gasp for love.... A Gasp of love is what I have without you my dearest Lord.....

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Date: 1/19/2016 12:14:00 PM
well done...love it
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:43:00 AM
no form no flow nothing exciting
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Chimwemwe Chiluba
Date: 10/31/2011 2:17:00 AM
WHAT DO YOU SUGGEST I SHOULD DO 2 MAKE IT FLOW?

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