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3/5/2025 for Break the Silence Poetry Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

The Gaslighter - No More

Waking up, I sense
something new, in the present tense.
I'm not what I was, or what I became.
I'd been a scapegoat for the blame,
and I felt guilt and I felt shame.
Who played, on me, this game?
I want to know the name
of the gaslighter.

Was it those closest to me,
my family who falsely drew me?
They're no longer with me - at any rate.
It was I who would cooperate,
and into myself, their story, integrate;
but, that is not to be my fate,
today, I choose my soul, to liberate
from the gaslighter.
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Miller Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Another excellent poem David, congratulations
Crandall Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Terry!
Empress Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 10:40 PM
Dear david, the ending hits deep and is so well written on this theme, to be blamed constantly when one is the victim is never nice and easy to endure and rise against! Youv rhymed very well and written a poem that would resonate with many thats been through similar situations! Brilliant! Thank you for joining in and for raising awareness on this subject. Congratulations on your placement
Crandall Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 8:50 AM
Thanks for having the contest, Ink Empress! It made me think a little more about process of trying to figure out become who you are, when you have received false messages about yourself - and how not to become those messages - or how to undo the influence of those messages - lol if that makes any sense.
Mckeithan Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 6:00 PM
Excellent poem David. There are too many gaslighters in this world that manipulate people. Also too many people who fall victim to them. Good luck in the contest
Crandall Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 7:00 PM
Thanks Oliver!
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 4:30 PM
Good one on the gas lighter theme. It happens more than people know. So many horrible manipulators in the world. Well done
Crandall Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 5:17 PM
Thanks Andrea - yep, and sometimes, it's hard to see when you're being manipulated.
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