The Garden of Good and Evil

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*Image of Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil by WordPress.com. The Garden of Good and Evil Alieferous winged hues span's flung, fun in light's sun, Insidious thing's cues hands clung spun delight's won. 2022 February 04

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Sotto Poet

Date: 2/6/2022 7:45:00 AM

William, Your well-crafted couplet was fascinating to read. Furthermore, I like the unique look. Sincerely apologize for missing a couple of your writings, my friend. I'm guessing this because your visible name has changed to "Hilo poet," but I'll return to read them all. I hope everything in your life is going well right now. Kindest regards

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/6/2022 8:14:00 AM

Yes, Lasaad, I felt that a statement was necessary for me to move forward with my life. Soon I'll be leaving back home to Hilo and have my son be by his mama. Heartfelt thanks for your noticing my name change, your laudation, and your sincere concerns my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2022 7:44:00 PM

I enjoyed your couplet and the interesting picture, William . hope all is going well for you these days. trying to keep up with so many Soupers. it gets hard sometimes!!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/6/2022 10:54:00 AM

oh my, such a day for you, William. My condolences again. It must be a terrible thing to endure.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/4/2022 8:09:00 PM

As I told Connie, a few hours earlier today, my family and I bid my son a final Aloha, they're, downstairs for the reception at his house and I'm posting this while my 3 yr-old grt-grndsn finally asleep. Heartfelt thanks for thinking of us soupers, Andrea, Aloha!