The Game

I have longed to tell him
The pieces of me
Though too broken to explain

I want him to mend me
But know 
The instructions didn't come with the game...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Tugaff Avatar
March 19, 2009 at 12:03 AM
Dear Jo, short but meaningful, powerful and wonderful poem. I love it. Keep on posting. Ernilando
Stockwood Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 4:40 PM
brilliant verse, very true to life, thanx for the comment.
Wood Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 1:04 PM
Very powerful and insightful. Yeah, what Raul said. Thanks for writing.
Moreno Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 9:24 PM
Nice concept, powerful work with stunning imagery...Raul
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