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The Game

I have longed to tell him The pieces of me Though too broken to explain I want him to mend me But know The instructions didn't come with the game...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/19/2009 12:03:00 AM
Dear Jo, short but meaningful, powerful and wonderful poem. I love it. Keep on posting. Ernilando
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Date: 3/14/2009 4:40:00 PM
brilliant verse, very true to life, thanx for the comment.
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Date: 3/14/2009 1:04:00 PM
Very powerful and insightful. Yeah, what Raul said. Thanks for writing.
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Date: 3/13/2009 9:24:00 PM
Nice concept, powerful work with stunning imagery...Raul
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