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The Four Winds

Boreas laughs and of his power we will know His breath in anger, a white blanket appears He breathes out the north wind and snow The master of cold and snow it appears Zephyrus the calm one, sprinkles hope from the west The bringer of hope, the father of fruit and of flower From Boreas won Chloris, she loved him the best Unlike his north brother, land didn’t devour. Notus, jealous of the crops Zephyrus brings forth Through summer he rages bringing storm from the south Determined in storms to scorch the lands to the north Flattens crops with hot winds when he opens his mouth But Euros the unlucky one, is he weak is he wild? Different from Zephyrus, Notus and Boreas that blow. From the East, he is either violent or mild. But insignificant it seems to his brothers, we know. But the God of all says he will hold these winds back If not, none would be saved. For come the day he takes his Kingship back The land with false gods will be paved. © 25/12/2014

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Date: 6/12/2021 6:32:00 AM
The King, of all things the Alpha and Omega Mandy, He Is the final arbiter of all happenings Although temporary God's will blow storms on Us, the end game is in Yahwehs hold Nothing passes His presence He is in supreme Control'
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Date: 6/12/2021 11:09:00 PM
Thanks for reading Joe, it's a long time since I wrote any poetry, but I do look in from time to time, and you are one of the poets I read. xx
Date: 6/12/2021 6:31:00 AM
The King, of all things the Alpha and Omega Mandy, He Is the final arbiter of all happenings Although temporary God's will blow storms on Us, the end game is in Yahwehs hold Nothing passes His presence He is in supreme Control'
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Date: 4/30/2016 8:28:00 PM
Loved your poem, Mandy. Was especiallysmitten by it because I had recently entered a contest on the the winds, The Wild Winds - Not the Williwaw, which featured the four winds in your poem. Your poem brings out their characteristics very well!
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:04:00 PM
Mandy, this poem is so beautifully written, including all the information seemingly without effort, making your lines sing with the whispers of the winds! I see why it is a winner. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/7/2015 1:44:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go ....Sara….Thanks for your de!ightful comments.
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:41:00 PM
Mandy, Congrats on your win... Linda
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:15:00 PM
I will have to check the list again to see what rating you got. Hope it was high and I see you got congrats. So good for you, mandy!!!
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:25:00 PM
Well done Mandy! Your knowledge of mythological gods has helped you produce a powerful write that has produced the desired results...thus, congratulations. Hope the new year has met you with open arms! All the best. // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:12:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Mandy:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:02:00 AM
Great write Mandy....Congrats on a the win....Happy New year...
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Date: 1/2/2015 6:15:00 AM
Congrats on the win and wish you all the best of 2015, Mandy
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Date: 1/2/2015 4:24:00 AM
Another pointer to your excellence, congrats Mandy....huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:23:00 AM
congrats on 2nd Mandy good research and rhyme ty for your support hugs
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Date: 12/29/2014 12:30:00 AM
wow, that ending is quite strong and unique, Mandy. Just the right twist to make your poem unique. Good luck in the contest. I have no idea how she will judge all the fine entries on wind gods.
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Date: 12/28/2014 6:31:00 PM
Mandy, Thank you for commenting on my comment. I want to take this time and wish you a wonderful New Year. I'm making this my year of new hopes and new opportunities. I have a good feeling, 2015 will be one of Poetry Soups Brighter and Better Years. Sending warm hugs. Always & Forever Linda
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Date: 12/28/2014 9:47:00 AM
love this thought-provoking write, Mandy. Great to see you here - have to admit, I don't visit half as much as I'd like to. Hope you had a wonderful Xmas xx
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Date: 12/28/2014 8:22:00 AM
At some point the angels who hold back the wind will turn it loose upon the earth and what awful times that will be..Enjoyed reading your mythological tales about the Gods of the winds..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/26/2014 5:34:00 AM
and i wish it just keeps on going and going, You the wondrous teller of tales, you that holds one breathless when reading your poetry....
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:44:00 AM
Thanks again for all your support harry xx
Date: 12/25/2014 10:23:00 PM
Excellent write Mandy. Merry Christmas and all the best in the new year. Hugs
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Cecillia, all the best to you and yours in 2015 xx
Date: 12/25/2014 10:19:00 PM
Mandy, well done, Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:44:00 AM
You too luv xx
Date: 12/25/2014 4:49:00 PM
excellent write for the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:45:00 AM
All the best for the new Year Jan and thanks for your support xx
Date: 12/25/2014 10:47:00 AM
A good creation on winds. -Safa
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:45:00 AM
Bless you safa and thanks, wishing you all the best for 2015 xx
Date: 12/25/2014 7:17:00 AM
Lovely characterization of the mythological wind gods, Merry Christmas, Mandy
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:46:00 AM
Hi Dr Ram, thanks, and wishing you all the best for the New year xx

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