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The Four Elements In Nature and Humanity

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Fire catches fast, then sweeps through grass and trees. The lion of the elements, it roars, and burning hot, displays its awesome might. Fire signs are one of four triplicities. Bravely, like lions, those of fire will fight. A fire-born person is one who adores his life, and what he wants he’ll simply seize! The element we need to breathe is air. This carrier of currents none can see is spaciousness surrounding everyone. Those born of air may seem aloof! They’re where they need to be; their thoughts float toward the sun. They analyze and then effectively communicate to us because they care. Sweet water! Always we can see it flow. It flows to sea; it ebbs, then flows again. Without it, plants and animals would die. Those born to water are the ones who show emotions freely. Hear them laugh and cry! They touch our souls and give us solace; then entreat us. . . let imagination go! Earth, the final element, is the land; God put us here with feet on solid ground. Sustaining us, it gives much that we need. Those born of earth are stable, for they stand for practicality. They plant the seed of reasoning. Four elements abound. When they’re in harmony, life can be grand! Written Feb. 9, 2016 for the HUMAN NATURE - 4 STANZA, 7 LINE Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/14/2020 3:49:00 PM
Andrea, your imagination combined with your talents for rhyme and meter seem to have no boundaries. Apparently you found this image and wrote a captivating poem to underscore it. I feel like I've seen this rhyme pattern before, but drawing a blank on its name. I assume it's not in the PS poem type options or you would have selected it. Just curious... Great poem, my friend!
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Date: 4/28/2016 12:34:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Andrea. PD
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Date: 4/20/2016 10:30:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write dear Andrea..
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:10:00 PM
Creative! Comparing the elements with human nature makes for good musing. I think I am closet to your air stanza ... with my head in the clouds. But I wish I could be a combination of that with the earth stanza ... so I could simultaneously keep my feet on the ground. I sure do like your unique ideas, my friend.
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Date: 2/16/2016 5:25:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/16/2016 2:02:00 AM
Congrats on ur fine win with this awesome write Andrea.
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Date: 2/15/2016 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea: An interesting angle on the competition and well written. I think I am an air sign ...my head is always in the clouds, LOL SuZ
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Date: 2/13/2016 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on this awesome win! You always come up with something different that stands out with your personality and talent. I really like this. A 7.
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Date: 2/13/2016 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM Andrea. I really thought this poem would be higher on the list. I loved it! :)
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Date: 2/13/2016 6:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea!
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:53:00 PM
Andrew, congrats on your lovely win. LINDA
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Date: 2/12/2016 3:55:00 AM
Okay girl, you put some work and thought into this entry. I bet it garners top honors! This Taurus loved it and I am faving it! #7
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Date: 2/11/2016 6:31:00 PM
I think I am a fire sign. I'm a Libra. Nice alchemical portrait here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/11/2016 3:06:00 PM
Water works for me :) Enjoyed this piece!
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:10:00 AM
Very complicated subject to be analyzed in such a small space, yet you have succeeded do just that dear Andrea! Here I will add a note on the element of air "the element we need to breath" as you say. You see, the word animal, animation, anima come from the Greek word "anemos" the divine breath that filled the cosmos and which man inhales and becomes animated thus gets his "anima" his soul! Hippocrates believed that to be healthy the four elements should be in harmony! Excellent and a seven!
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:51:00 AM
Love your take of what human nature is.
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:35:00 AM
Awesome! I really like this. ;)
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Date: 2/11/2016 6:55:00 AM
A real tribute to the elements. This is very optimistic and charming--so it says a lot about you! You bring a smile to this face often. Strangely, every time I think about the four elements, my thoughts also drift to the crazy Bruce Willis film, The Fifth Element. I can't help it.
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Date: 2/11/2016 3:22:00 AM
- A great and interesting poem Andrea - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/10/2016 11:40:00 PM
and really fascinating to connect with nature's elements... you crafted this with such grandeur and flair!.. on to the winners' list, andie.. huggs
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Date: 2/10/2016 10:02:00 PM
I enjoyed this poetic learning experience very much
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Date: 2/10/2016 9:06:00 PM
Lovely poem, but details details details, just focus on Libra's the best of em all!!!! Hugs!
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:39:00 PM
what an intriguing write - I now know I'm an air sign ... guess I've got my head in the clouds lol:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:46:00 PM
Andrea, good luck in the contest it looks like you captured the theme a 7 . I'm kind of scattered brain with this one. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:29:00 PM
Andrea, this is just awesome! So solid, I'm faving it..hope Ms. Mo does too :), jill
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