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Area veiled by vines surely will lodge us cozy As I travel through life, thoughts pass across my head. wedged neatly in the realm of a hanging shanty It's delightful to see flowers blooming in the wake of a rough cold dirt soil that will cling to our innately earthy beauty Emotions are rooted in the mind and in my body spread. glass windows convey the tone of the story a beginner's approach to creative writing using spotty words. hues of the forest oscillating inflow velocity What do you believe will transpire at the end? humming coffeepot on fire and is wobbly. Those who cross the boundary will not be rescinded.
Written: July 16, 2021 Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 7/16/2021 10:36:00 PM
After posting your poem, you can edit and add an apostrophe. Lovely alluring forest.
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/17/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thank Victor I know how to do that Victor, but I don’t know where or why should I add the apostrophe.
Date: 7/16/2021 3:52:00 PM
Hello Tayeb Lasaad, this is a beautiful scene. With a beautiful poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2021 3:34:00 PM
I left you a message on the very first poem. Please read it. Thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/17/2021 11:50:00 AM
Hello Tayeb Lasaad, your welcome my friend. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/16/2021 4:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, your words are so kind and uplifting, have a blessed evening and kindest regards

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