The Forest

The forest so vast and full spreads like a carpet before me.
Hiding her scars and loss from view of those not knowing the trees.
Those who walk there, touch each trunk and limb, see differently.

Their heart rejoices as young shoots sprout and saplings spread and climb ,
Chasing bright sunbeam’s rays till their canopy calling they find.

Their heart burdened by the storm tossed ones who once were strong and tall,
Now twisted , failing and lacking, bravely refusing to fall.

Sadly they recall the fallen, who’s cool shade and shield they shared.
Each stump kindles treasured memories for all that tarried there.

To some an overview of the forest is how life should be,
But I want to “walk the woods” and know every wonderful tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/31/2017 3:37:00 PM
Nice to make your acquaintance, Jack -- pleased to know you! My very best regards for your imminent New Year - Cheers!! :) john
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Date: 12/23/2017 12:26:00 PM
I like your interpretation of the forest...Life...All the best Jack
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 12/23/2017 9:31:00 PM
Thank you for reading and for your insight. All the best! JE
Date: 12/23/2017 11:22:00 AM
Well written, you expressed this very well..
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 12/23/2017 11:35:00 AM
Thank you for reading And your thought
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