Notes About The Poem

The Footpath


The Footpath


The footpath to eternity

Crosses our sea of time

Beyond

Horizon of mortality,

Where in Heaven sublime,

Souls bond.


© Sandra M. Haight 2015 
   All Rights Reserved


~NA~
Contest: Memento of Waters ~ Visual #1
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Syllables Checked: 8,6,2,8,6,2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 4:04 PM
wowowow, VERY nicely done!
Haight Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Thanks, Andrea...I just love working with these visuals. The second I saw the one I used, the theme came to me. Hugs, Sandra
Pinet Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 1:54 PM
The imagery is good and the reader can visualize the experience encoded within its reading. Emile. #7
Haight Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:14 PM
Thank you, Emile. You are so kind with your very encouraging remarks. Much appreciated. Sandra
Shaw Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Hi Sandra, this is a very special write. The imagery is magnificent! Good luck in the contest. A **7** Hugs, Kimberly xx
Haight Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:10 PM
Thank you so much, Kimberly. I appreciate your encouraging comments, support and good wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 10:28 AM
simply stunning imagery Sandra - I am blown away with your words - this will place very well for you ! Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Haight Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:03 PM
I am so pleased that you like this, Jan, and so much appreciate your positive comments. Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra
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