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The Fog of Night

As we wade into the fog of the night, In fear, people reach and grope with blind eye. May there be on all of our paths bright light. Hurried from their houses, fleeing in fright, No time for farewells, no huddled good-bye, As we wade into the fog of the night. Hubris hoists feeble minds to lofty height, With unbridled tongues that lead with a lie. May there be on all of our paths bright light. Why? Why do the giants abuse their might? Concealing answers, who will tell us why, As we wade into the fog of the night? In dire plight, we know the way that is right. The way ahead, for every step, we cry, “May there be on all of our paths bright light.” Treading through carnage and unsightly blight, Our hope in our future keeps our heads high. As we wade into the fog of the night, May there be on all of our paths bright light. ———————— An Original Villanelle Contest Sponsored by: L Milton Hankins Written 02/28/2022

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Date: 3/4/2022 5:05:00 AM
A timely troubling and hopeful write MD. Nicely done
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Md Johnson
Date: 3/5/2022 6:32:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words - MDJ
Date: 3/4/2022 1:07:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 3/5/2022 6:39:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words. Jeremiah 29:11 - “‘For I well know the thoughts that I am thinking toward you,’ declares Jehovah, ‘thoughts of peace, and not of calamity, to give you a future and a hope."
Date: 3/3/2022 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. You write with a poignant heart and touch the reality of the difficult times we live in. :)Paulette
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Md Johnson
Date: 3/3/2022 8:51:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and the congratulations. Congratulations on your win as well :-). Best regards - MDJ
Date: 3/3/2022 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations, MD, on your placement in my Villanelle contest. Your poem touched my heart, especially during these difficult days. It was a splendid write!
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Md Johnson
Date: 3/3/2022 8:48:00 PM
Thank you for the kind placement and the sentiment. Best regards — MDJ
Date: 3/1/2022 5:44:00 AM
Thank you for the hope and horror of this
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Md Johnson
Date: 3/2/2022 7:31:00 AM
Thank you for visiting this write. Very much appreciated.
Date: 3/1/2022 4:46:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful!
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Md Johnson
Date: 3/2/2022 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Valerie. A very kind and generous compliment. Best regards. —MDJ

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