The Flutter

against my cheek the flutter of an eyelash snow flakes fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 11:35 PM
Very pretty!
Song Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 11:14 PM
It wasn't a snowflake after all....just brilliant..haiku master!
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October 13, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Well done! Good use of imagery to convey this moment. Karen
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