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The Flutter

against my cheek the flutter of an eyelash snow flakes fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/31/2011 11:35:00 PM
Very pretty!
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Date: 10/15/2011 11:14:00 PM
It wasn't a snowflake after all....just brilliant..haiku master!
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Date: 10/13/2011 7:25:00 PM
Well done! Good use of imagery to convey this moment. Karen
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