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The Flower Vase

Just now the sky put A bouquet of crimson clouds In your flower vase And lo how the vase Explodes in some millions of Purple molecules In the swimming pool Children splashing wild water Your vase in laughter You and I pass on But the bouquet in the vase Is ever crimson __________________________ March 12, 2017

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Date: 3/19/2017 10:23:00 PM
There is a very good-natured, well-rounded sense to this poem. It moves fast - right away there is the sky's action and an immediate explosion, children, and mortality. In with the colors is the essence of a good man, writing.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/20/2017 6:47:00 AM
Well, my friend ... Thank you for your appreciation ... but the words have mostly been used symbolically ...
Date: 3/12/2017 12:39:00 PM
What divine bouquets of Haiku that forever the soul delight dear. Probir! A seven for each my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2017 11:56:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/12/2017 9:29:00 AM
Lovely haikus, Probir, soft and beautiful:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/12/2017 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Jo ...
Date: 3/11/2017 8:52:00 PM
I like it, Probir! Have not figured it all out yet, but I like it. : )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/12/2017 1:07:00 AM
Please do ... Because you are a connoisseur ... Thank you ...

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