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A big thank you to the eloquent Gregory Barden who took on this collaboration with me at the last minute and who helped me improve a few of my couplets as well. Sure hope you get your copy posted soon, Greg!

 

Not too long ago, and being so small, I knew of my purpose nothing at all. Oh, sweet little bud, how I yearned to be fed Abiding long days, hoping petals would spread As cotton clouds cried and moistened my space, I bloomed forth in glory, sun warming my face! One illustrious morn, as my rounds had begun Your petals yawned tenderly, kissed by the sun A beautiful bird with fast-flapping wings is nourished by me; oh, how my heart sings! Now, dear one, don't fear me as gently, I spin For precious, the nectar, that sweetens within The reason my sisters and I sprang from earth - sweet-scented and pink - I now KNOW! I have worth! Each sunrise we'll greet with harmonious song Serenading the day until shadows grow long! A collaboration poem for James Edward Lee Sr.'s Duets: I Shall Collaborate With You Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/1/2018 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 8/1/2018 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your First Place win for this excellent collaboration with Gregory! Beautiful! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/31/2018 8:56:00 PM
Lovely collaboration. Superbly done. Congrats on your gold medal win, Andrea and Gregory.
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Beautiful!
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Date: 7/31/2018 4:40:00 AM
Excellent work, Andrea and Greg. This is what you get when two outstanding poets collaborate. A big congratulations on your top win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/30/2018 10:09:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece, Andrea & Gregory... Congratulations on your collaborating win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/10/2018 5:57:00 PM
Very lovely and successful collaboration with Greg, Andrea. How could you go wrong!!
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Date: 2/21/2018 7:44:00 PM
I love this collaboration :) favs How are you Andrea :)
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Date: 1/24/2018 6:26:00 PM
Oh this is a beautiful collaboration! You are both so talented and always top the lists, deservedly so. I loved this lovely entry! : )
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Date: 1/22/2018 12:14:00 AM
A sweet, beautiful and cute write Andrea and Greg. My congratulations to both of you. i enjoyed your poem...Maria
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Date: 1/21/2018 10:00:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea and Greg.. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/21/2018 4:01:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2018 12:52:00 PM
I read it from Gregory's posting...Completely sweet poem indeed...All the best Andrea
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Date: 1/21/2018 5:00:00 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea... Congrats on your win..Thanks for your support..
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Date: 1/20/2018 8:35:00 PM
A well written collaboration indeed Andrea! I saw a humming bird once up close, about a foot from my head for about 3 seconds... they are fast!
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Date: 1/20/2018 6:22:00 PM
Aha. Two Horn's. About my purpose knew nothing at all. This Bud's for me so did drink and myself fed. Up the creek is where it all led. Did you know Trump is nocturnal; and wet in his bed.
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Date: 1/20/2018 1:52:00 PM
you write beautifully together
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Date: 1/20/2018 10:27:00 AM
Awwwwww, you and Greg wrote a beautiful poem, Andrea. Every word, every line is poetry beauty and I was/am enchanted by the write. The lines flow with grace and are absolutely stunning. A joy to read! Love ... CayCay
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Date: 1/20/2018 9:36:00 AM
Lovely collaboration Andrea..
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Date: 1/20/2018 8:56:00 AM
- A pleasure to read this co-write ... lovely :) - Best wishes in the contest to you both :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2018 8:45:00 AM
Ooh I love how you made this a conversation, and very lovely at that! Such a beautiful collaboration, it reads like a song.. hope it does very well in the contest dear Andrea :)
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Date: 1/20/2018 7:35:00 AM
beautiful, sheer classic poetry.. wonderful collab.
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Date: 1/20/2018 7:09:00 AM
A joyful creation Andrea and Greg..very sweet dialogue..lovely flow..a winning poem.
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Date: 1/20/2018 6:59:00 AM
Andra, you and Gregory did such a great job on this collaboration. I really enjoyed it this morning. John
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Date: 1/20/2018 12:53:00 AM
A sweet poem ... a cute read ... beautiful indeed ... a splendid partnership ...
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