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A big thank you to the eloquent Gregory Barden who took on this collaboration with me at the last minute and who helped me improve a few of my couplets as well. Sure hope you get your copy posted soon, Greg!

 

The Flower and the Hummingbird

Not too long ago, and being so small,
I knew of my purpose nothing at all.

                Oh, sweet little bud, how I yearned to be fed
                Abiding long days, hoping petals would spread

As cotton clouds cried and moistened my space,
I bloomed forth in glory, sun warming my face!

               One illustrious morn, as my rounds had begun
               Your petals yawned tenderly, kissed by the sun

A beautiful bird with fast-flapping wings
is nourished by me; oh, how my heart sings!

              Now, dear one, don't fear me as gently, I spin
              For precious, the nectar, that sweetens within

The reason my sisters and I sprang from earth -
sweet-scented and pink - I now KNOW! I have worth!

              Each sunrise we'll greet with harmonious song
              Serenading the day until shadows grow long!


A collaboration poem for 
James Edward Lee Sr.'s Duets: I Shall Collaborate With You Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
Haight Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your First Place win for this excellent collaboration with Gregory! Beautiful! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Lovely collaboration. Superbly done. Congrats on your gold medal win, Andrea and Gregory.
Gentry Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Beautiful!
Devonshire Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:40 AM
Excellent work, Andrea and Greg. This is what you get when two outstanding poets collaborate. A big congratulations on your top win! Love, Carolyn
Roper Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 10:09 AM
This is a beautiful piece, Andrea & Gregory... Congratulations on your collaborating win. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Very lovely and successful collaboration with Greg, Andrea. How could you go wrong!!
Duncan Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 7:44 PM
I love this collaboration :) favs How are you Andrea :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Oh this is a beautiful collaboration! You are both so talented and always top the lists, deservedly so. I loved this lovely entry! : )
Williams Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 12:14 AM
A sweet, beautiful and cute write Andrea and Greg. My congratulations to both of you. i enjoyed your poem...Maria
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea and Greg.. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Michael Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 12:52 PM
I read it from Gregory's posting...Completely sweet poem indeed...All the best Andrea
May Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 5:00 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea... Congrats on your win..Thanks for your support..
Hagy Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:35 PM
A well written collaboration indeed Andrea! I saw a humming bird once up close, about a foot from my head for about 3 seconds... they are fast!
Horn Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Aha. Two Horn's. About my purpose knew nothing at all. This Bud's for me so did drink and myself fed. Up the creek is where it all led. Did you know Trump is nocturnal; and wet in his bed.
Horne Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 1:52 PM
you write beautifully together
Godwin Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Awwwwww, you and Greg wrote a beautiful poem, Andrea. Every word, every line is poetry beauty and I was/am enchanted by the write. The lines flow with grace and are absolutely stunning. A joy to read! Love ... CayCay
One Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Lovely collaboration Andrea..
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:56 AM
- A pleasure to read this co-write ... lovely :) - Best wishes in the contest to you both :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rv Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Ooh I love how you made this a conversation, and very lovely at that! Such a beautiful collaboration, it reads like a song.. hope it does very well in the contest dear Andrea :)
Horsman Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 7:35 AM
beautiful, sheer classic poetry.. wonderful collab.
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 7:09 AM
A joyful creation Andrea and Greg..very sweet dialogue..lovely flow..a winning poem.
Gondolf Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Andra, you and Gregory did such a great job on this collaboration. I really enjoyed it this morning. John
Gupta Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 12:53 AM
A sweet poem ... a cute read ... beautiful indeed ... a splendid partnership ...
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