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The Flower

Lonely flower arid field butterfly foraging.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/7/2019 11:03:00 PM

Something quite beautiful about this imagery!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2019 9:34:00 AM

I really love this image!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/7/2019 12:17:00 AM

Lovely concise haiku, Allen. Janice

Caycay Jennings

Date: 6/5/2019 11:15:00 AM

Enjoyed the image your pen painted, very sweet! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/4/2019 4:38:00 PM

Nicely imaged! :) gw

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/4/2019 5:12:00 AM

Come to my city. No lonely flowers.)) But I get your Haiku. It's well done. Some leave me hanging. Yours is perfect.. Thank you.. Panagiota

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/3/2019 6:50:00 PM

- Next year there will be more flowers ... and butterflies, bees and bumblebees will love this place ... never alone again, Allen - A nice haiku :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/3/2019 3:37:00 PM

State of the planet, love this, and the imagery it projects..

Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/3/2019 9:15:00 AM

Where there a flower and field, there you will find a butterfly; even if a lonely flower... salute Allen alkas

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/2/2019 10:18:00 PM

"Tis destiny allen, Aloha William

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 6/2/2019 11:22:00 PM

Indeed William