The Flow

how sweet the flow, tween toe n toe, when love does have its way, remembered things of long ago, when love flowed like the rain, i know....it remains ... beneath the surface flow... thank you Chiquita "unveiled" Don
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Mohammed Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 1:41 PM
I loved it Don!! Reminiscent thoughts... Love Diana
Williams Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 7:11 AM
Don, tween you and me, lovely words I see...Dave
Roberts Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 11:37 PM
great rhyme here Don
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April 28, 2012 at 9:55 PM
I just love your magnificent poem here Don! My favorite line has to be, "When love flowed like the rain, "as when love would be strong and prevalent in times past! Glorious write right there! Awesome Work!!
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