The Flow

how sweet the flow, tween toe n toe, when love does have its way, remembered things of long ago, when love flowed like the rain, i know....it remains ... beneath the surface flow... thank you Chiquita "unveiled" Don

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Diana Mohammed

Date: 4/29/2012 1:41:00 PM

I loved it Don!! Reminiscent thoughts... Love Diana

David Williams

Date: 4/29/2012 7:11:00 AM

Don, tween you and me, lovely words I see...Dave

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/28/2012 11:37:00 PM

great rhyme here Don

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/28/2012 9:55:00 PM

I just love your magnificent poem here Don! My favorite line has to be, "When love flowed like the rain, "as when love would be strong and prevalent in times past! Glorious write right there! Awesome Work!!