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The Floogate

Walls were covered in cobwebs that chattered.
Splash is flaking from the crumbling floodgate.
It was flawed to wait while you were battered.
Walls were covered in cobwebs that chattered.
A long time of hush leads in aged flattered.
And some items that may freshly relate.
Walls were covered in cobwebs that chattered.
Splash is flaking from the crumbling floodgate.

Written: February 20, 2023

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Hat Bueckert March 17, 2023 at 8:16 AM Quite the knack for vivid descriptions and out of the box wording choice. Always makes for a good read and perhaps a different take on something that wouldn't have been there before. Superb :)

Kim Rodrigues February 22, 2023 at 9:39 AM Speaks of the aging process…

Vijay Pandit February 21, 2023 at 7:10 AM It must be the warning of danger that is depicted in this scene. Your imagination and creativity on display my friend.

Victor Buhagiar February 21, 2023 at 1:12 AM Great imagination to see cobwebs chattering.