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Walls were covered in cobwebs that chattered. Splash is flaking from the crumbling floodgate. It was flawed to wait while you were battered. Walls were covered in cobwebs that chattered. A long time of hush leads in aged flattered. And some items that may freshly relate. Walls were covered in cobwebs that chattered. Splash is flaking from the crumbling floodgate.
Written: February 20, 2023

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Date: 3/17/2023 8:16:00 AM
Quite the knack for vivid descriptions and out of the box wording choice. Always makes for a good read and perhaps a different take on something that wouldn't have been there before. Superb :)
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Date: 2/22/2023 9:39:00 AM
Speaks of the aging process…
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Date: 2/21/2023 7:10:00 AM
It must be the warning of danger that is depicted in this scene. Your imagination and creativity on display my friend.
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Date: 2/21/2023 1:12:00 AM
Great imagination to see cobwebs chattering.
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