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The flooding begins

you'll cry me an onion
i didn't mean to upset you so ~
multiple layers shed endless tears



AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 5:58 PM
'cry me an onion'--love it...quite clever
Gauthier Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 8:53 PM
lol ~ thank you , Sara
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