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The Flightless Bird Must Break

The robin that shuddered from the island of the lake, The robin that tossed until each feather was a flake, The robin in the wind that watched the waters awake, Robin red-breast numb with ache. For the rhyme-battle 2 competition

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Date: 12/11/2013 10:08:00 AM
Aiden, .. Congratulations in "'Rhyme Battle: Round 2 contest''...have a nice one... LUV *LINDA
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:35:00 PM
Poor robin. Enjoyed your descriptions n rhyme. Congrats, Aiden!
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