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The Flight

raised expansive wings commence synchronized flutter ---begin ascension.

Copyright © Susan Palli | Year Posted 2016

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February 5, 2017 at 11:37 AM

Wow, instead of painting a picture you presented a video! Very nicely done!

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

October 10, 2016 at 4:50 AM

Wow, very nice! I have yet to try a Monoku...I'm still working through Haikus LOL! Congratulations on your win with this poem. again...very nice Susan. MC

October 13, 2016 at 12:36 PM

Thank you!

Dineen Williams Gault

April 21, 2016 at 7:57 AM

Your spot on descriptive line allowed readers to conjure such a beautiful image of flight. Awesome, congratulations!

April 12, 2016 at 5:38 PM

Congrats Susan, for your first placement in the contest!!! :-)

April 23, 2016 at 12:54 AM

Thank you, Teddy!

Poet Destroyer A

April 10, 2016 at 10:46 PM

Susan, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

April 21, 2016 at 11:07 AM

Thank you, Linda!

April 10, 2016 at 8:24 AM

Congratulations Susan, very well done...

April 10, 2016 at 11:28 AM

Thank you, Charlie.

April 8, 2016 at 2:01 AM

Congratulations Susan on your top win:}

April 8, 2016 at 11:11 AM

Thanks!

April 8, 2016 at 4:24 AM

Great observation for the nice monoku. Congratulations...

April 7, 2016 at 9:51 PM

Congrats, Susan on your TOP Win

April 8, 2016 at 11:11 AM

Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2016 at 7:47 PM

CONGRATS, Susan. ME LIKEY!

April 8, 2016 at 11:11 AM

Thanks!

April 7, 2016 at 6:52 PM

Congrats on your well deserved placement in this contest!

April 10, 2016 at 11:28 AM

Thank you, Brian.

April 7, 2016 at 3:50 PM

Congrats on your creative, top win, Susan :)

April 8, 2016 at 11:12 AM

Thanks!

April 7, 2016 at 2:57 PM

Creative work..Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

April 8, 2016 at 11:12 AM

Thanks!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

April 7, 2016 at 2:50 PM

Congratulations Susan

April 8, 2016 at 11:12 AM

Thanks!

Connie Marcum Wong

April 7, 2016 at 1:52 PM

What a vivid visual your line produces in the mind! Beautiful Susan and most deserving of first place! Congratulations! #7 ; )

April 8, 2016 at 11:13 AM

Thanks!

April 7, 2016 at 12:27 PM

A very descriptive monoku, Susan! I like that 'synchronized flutter'....and the 'ascension' lifted you to first place! Congratulations! // paul

April 8, 2016 at 11:13 AM

Thanks for the clever comment!

April 7, 2016 at 11:52 AM

Congrats Susan for the wonderful line to win. Love. Anisha D

April 8, 2016 at 11:14 AM

Thanks!

Hansteven Selfa

April 7, 2016 at 9:23 AM

That's what I like about you Susan! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

April 8, 2016 at 11:14 AM

Thanks!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 7, 2016 at 2:35 AM

Wow such a lovely monoku.. no wonder top podium.. big congrats Susan..

April 8, 2016 at 11:14 AM

Thank you!

April 7, 2016 at 2:31 AM

This was a stunning take on my photo, and very much captured the motion and drama of taking flight. Begin ascension indeed. Congrats on your top place win and thanks for participating in my contest!

April 7, 2016 at 6:05 AM

Thanks so much,Timothy! I am honored that you picked mine. I was motivated to learn to write Monoku and haiku through your contests. So grateful to you!

Andrea Dietrich

April 3, 2016 at 12:32 PM

SO cool. I think you completely captured what was happening.

April 10, 2016 at 11:29 AM

Thanks Andrea!

April 1, 2016 at 4:33 PM

Nicely penned Susan

April 10, 2016 at 11:30 AM

Thank you, Joseph.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 1, 2016 at 1:04 PM

- Wonderful line, Susan - Good luck in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

April 10, 2016 at 11:30 AM

Thank you, Anne Lise.

April 1, 2016 at 7:48 AM

very beautiful one liner Susan good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

April 10, 2016 at 11:31 AM

Thank you Jan.

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