The Flaw In Flawlessness

For what great fault does your beauty mask?
Could it kill, maybe maim?
Could it turn me to glass
And smash what's left?
If I asked,
Would you tell me?
Or should I simply believe what my mother’s foretelling?
She says, “Beauty is fun till you run and you fall,
And those with the beauty have the most flaws of all.”
And I trust her.
This is all I can muster.
‘Cause I’m flustered by what you’re saying and not saying
And games I don’t want to be playing.
And that’s why I’m here.
To get some finality.
Find a real someone that can bring my reality
Right back to my dreams
With no in-betweens
Or and’s or but’s about it.
‘Cause without it,
I’m really just finding myself a little more clouded
And, overall, lost.
Hurt and exhausted.
Accosted with so many "favors" all I want is a break
From the dim and the fake.
How long will it take me?
All these people mistake me for something less than I’m worth.
It’s starting to hurt.
They depart,
And I work
On collecting the pieces of heart
I can tape back together.
It’s not “now or never,”
Doesn’t have to be “forever.”
I'm just a little upset by ash-ending endeavors.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 11, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Trail, welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you will find much to encourage you on this site as you share your poetry with others who love to write. I enjoyed your first poem very much. Please visit my poems when you are able. Many writers will comment on your poetry if you do the same. Best wishes.
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June 11, 2014 at 1:42 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Trail :) - I choose your first very well written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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June 11, 2014 at 10:45 AM
Trail, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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June 10, 2014 at 8:47 PM
I like the flow, and rhyme here, Trial,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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