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The Five

A mother and her four daughters Travelled to a new land Many miles across the ocean To a place of golden sand They prospered in their new country Were happy as it was now home The second eldest daughter later travelled She felt the need to roam She married and had children In the land they had left behind Eventually divorced As her marriage declined The five shared an unbreakable bond Together always their destiny Their love knew no distance Connected by blood eternally The mum and second oldest were taken by cancer Their life journey no longer meant to be The five are no longer Sadly, now only three …

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Date: 10/31/2022 4:58:00 AM
Life and its stories make for very interesting stories, sometimes fiction can''t hold a candle to ones that are true! Your story begs thought as it entertains!! Well done Dab! Happy Monday xxoo
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Date: 10/30/2022 8:28:00 PM
Wow, food for thought, Deb, I know of 2 in my family, after half of us left for a land of golden sands. Whom journey is nearly over. Your poem sits neat with me. Love this. Harry
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Date: 10/28/2022 7:22:00 AM
Hi Deb, You penned a well-written write. I found it to be sad and heartfelt. Well done. Have a great day and weekend-Alexis
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Date: 10/28/2022 2:27:00 AM
- A sad story… beautifully written, Deb :) - hug
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Date: 10/28/2022 2:14:00 AM
This is indeed a sad poem but so well written. Cuddles
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