The First Visitor

flash of yellow flight
              a goldfinch lands on bird bath
                        the first visitor

Heidi Sands

8/14/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Neumann Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 3:20 AM
Seen one just now ...
Sands Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Thank you Kai. Nice, :)
May Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 6:19 AM
Wonderful write Heidi,
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Krutsinger Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Your imagery so well done in but a few words
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your kind feedback Caren :)
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 3:04 PM
A lovely scene you've created Heidi. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Sands Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 3:09 PM
Thank you Tom. Yes, my weekend is going well, thanks. I hope you are enjoying it. :)
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