The First Time Ever

The first time ever I saw your face
a pioneering heart began to race,
the first time ever I saw your smile
long journey but worth every single mile,
the first time ever your magical touch
sparks the memory I remember so much,
the first time ever a glimpse of your eyes
those that shamed the blueness of godly skies,
the first time ever in warm embrace
the sweetness of your breath one could taste.

The first time ever to hold you in dance
we held on tight in true loves romance,
beneath the moonlight to “This song is Blue”
yes together we dance just me just you.

The first time ever we said goodbye
the trial the tribulations of the saddest eye,
transferred to one’s sentiment does lend
this to vow this love will never end!

 Entered Mark Toney's Marathon mile 26
29/1/2023
Original post 2013.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/14/2013 7:38:00 PM
Wow!! I have tears Harry I just love this beautiful magical sweet write, well done :)
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Date: 1/7/2013 9:17:00 AM
Romantic but sad one. Style of writing is different. Loved much, always bl
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Date: 1/7/2013 12:14:00 AM
Now that's love....X-celent write Harry!
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Date: 1/6/2013 1:47:00 AM
Wow Harry this is stunning, I was totally captivated from start to finish. You should be proud of this one.
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Date: 1/5/2013 10:04:00 PM
Awesome write my dear friend, Harry!So sweet and romantic! Thank you for sharing and your stopping by! Have a nice day! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 1/5/2013 12:25:00 PM
Dear Harry, you took me decades back and made me relive some magic moments and for that I thank you. Your writing inspiring, romantic and all too human is wonderfully wrapped up in a beautiful verse. Thank you for your comment!
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Date: 1/5/2013 8:30:00 AM
dear Harry, appreciate so much for stopping by and thank you for sharing your wonderful work..:) so lovely ...so wonderful :) <3
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Date: 1/5/2013 4:10:00 AM
We all remember that first time :) Awesome write, Harry. Love it!
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Date: 1/5/2013 3:58:00 AM
superb write my friend Harry...i love it :) can I click "Fav Poem"? Thanks for sharing. Have a nice weekend!!
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Date: 1/4/2013 4:00:00 PM
Such A delight in dance in closeness, that embraces all memories of inseparable inspiration... Great write Harry life can't get any better than this...
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Date: 1/4/2013 4:14:00 AM
greatLy inspired...wonderful and touching poem, Harry....
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Date: 1/3/2013 10:13:00 PM
A fine poem, Harry. a nice poem to seek with inspiration. I will now read Mandy's ~Luv*SKAT
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Date: 1/3/2013 9:28:00 PM
Harry; This is so nice. I say it's very romantic. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/3/2013 12:31:00 PM
Wow i must inspire you more or at least a song must. we should do some poems on songs, what do you reckon.?
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Harry Horsman
Date: 1/3/2013 3:15:00 PM
i'm gamed if you are
Date: 1/3/2013 12:21:00 PM
Harry, what an incredible way to be inspired by a fellow souper's poem. I recall seeing Mandy's poem last night as well, Can you imagine all the romantic poetry that must have been inspired by that beautiful song from so long ago. I LOVE this one. love when you write this way!!
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Date: 1/3/2013 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful, Harry - just like love! I love it :)
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Date: 1/3/2013 6:28:00 AM
You start the new year with a lovely poem,Harry. - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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