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The First Leaf of Autumn

In the still of the night a soft murmur of an uncaring breeze tears away the first yellow leaf of a foreboding Autumn dropping it on silent ground...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/3/2008 10:04:00 AM
A melancholy touch for the end of summer. A great metaphor for depression.God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/3/2008 4:07:00 AM
Ahhh, sweet sweet autumn and all the beautiful words she brings...lovely poem of the season. As for my 'apricot' poem..I wrote it a couple of months ago, but had not posted it until now (just for you!) today. Thanks for looking, that was nice. :) It's a haiku. Take care, love Kristin
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Date: 9/2/2008 8:47:00 PM
a very colorful and warm piece of poetry
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