Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Couplet

The First Kiss I Remember

So Many loves that I recall in a life so brash and bold
Giving me my fondest memories to enjoy when I get old
Each had their moment and I loved them one and all
There is one more kiss, the funniest I recall
We called her Marbles and to me she was so much more
I'd laugh when she'd come to me as I was playing on the floor
I was just a child, so naïve, so innocent, so weak
She kissed me on the face and left saliva on my cheek
She'd sit in front of my chair, looking up as she begs
The first kiss I remember was from a female with four legs

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Chuck Novotny March 31, 2012 at 12:25 AM Very touching. Indeed, a most delightful memory eloquently captured. - Chuck

Elizabeth Wesley June 23, 2011 at 7:03 PM They sure are special kisses, always welcome. I don't have them any more as she died a short time ago. I love the sentiment though.

Nette Onclaud April 13, 2011 at 4:59 AM oh so sweet, vince.. a charming first kiss from a loved pet, i suppose... this is blastly unique;a sure winner for me! mised ya of late; come visit my page?:) huggs, nette

James Foulk April 12, 2011 at 9:05 PM a great write and enjoyed this one. i have not heard from you in a while.

Emma Mantle April 11, 2011 at 10:10 AM I enjoyed this Vince. Nice flow to this couplet, great ending. Best wishes in the contest Em :)

Carrie Richards April 10, 2011 at 2:41 PM And this was one girl that you could depend on (hopefully ) that would not jilt you !! Love this, Vince!!

Deb Wilson April 10, 2011 at 1:33 PM awww so sweet! Really liked this one! love,Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 10, 2011 at 12:35 PM Very cute write Vince and can relate to the many loves in life .. so brash and bold luv.. good luck in Frank's contest.. your last line is so great .. our animals kisses are the best ..happy Sunday...

Judy Konos April 10, 2011 at 11:45 AM Loved it and if I get a dog you know what his name will be! found this cat at the post office named him zip code...so maybe there will be a marbles and a zip code...thanks for the delightful poem and good luck in the contest

Michelle Mac Donald April 10, 2011 at 10:09 AM LOL..so funny, Vince! It would have been a memorable first kiss, for sure.:) It was sweet of you to remember, "Marbles" Sounds like a great pet and friend. Wishing you and yours the best! Stay well and keep up those happy writes! Mikki