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The First Cut Is the Deepest

The First Cut Is The Deepest I have a razor blade in my hand There is no world outside this man An act of selfishness was my plan I cried for me one last time I guess I once loved this friend of mine. The razor cuts deep beneath my skin I do not feel it my brain is occupied with other things The blood trickled as my conscousness weakened All I saw was darkness and unreason. Now in a deathly sleep All around me quiet keep Love cuts deep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/7/2013 10:47:00 AM
Peter, :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's "Razor Sharp" contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda
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Date: 7/5/2013 3:14:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem
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Date: 7/2/2013 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win. Connie
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:53:00 PM
Hi Peter, :-) Congrats! with your awesome razor sharp poem................ SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:27:00 PM
congrats ' NATE
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